Stories with Adjectives
Posted by lev2000 on January 5, 2008
Well, you asked for something new; so here it is!
We’re currently on the topic of Adjectives….you know the words that modify nouns and pronouns?
Write a short story…no more than a few paragraphs in length. My challenge to you is to use as many adjectives as possible. Now, this story can be true or, more likely, made up. Be creative, make someone laugh, and of course, use ADJECTIVES. If you can bold them do so, if you can capitalize them do that instead. We can have a friendly competition to see who can use the most adjectives effectively.
Give ‘er a try!
January 5th, 2008 at 2:43 pm
Note: not a SHORT story, but it does have adjectives!
Well, I woke up this morning, and it was a GRAY, DREARY day. I went and took a HOT shower and then made some YUMMY, STRONG coffee. I booted up my COOL laptop and started working on some NEAT web 2.0 projects. My CUTE kids woke up a bit later and we ate waffles with STICKY syrup……….
How’d I do? Note to students: teachers still need help sometimes too!
January 5th, 2008 at 9:06 pm
OMG I LOVE THE NEW THEME:(). You fianlly got a new post on.
OMG I can remember the four Q’s that an ADJ answers
what kind
wich one
how many
how much
(OMG I THINK THAT I AM TURNINFG INTO A “GRAMMAR DORK” LIKE MRS.V)
ONE RAINY, DREARRY day Tweety woke up. She glanced at the clock to find that it was 7:00am!! Her MIDDLE school started at 7:45am!! So she hurriedly zommed to get herself ready. She was in such a BIG worry about being late for school that she foregot to put on ~her~ FAVORITE shoes.
When she got to THE school she realized that she had put on her OLDER brother’s shoes!!! They were UGLY, OLD, BLACK, RATTY thangs. Latter in GYM class she found out that her two sockes did not match. Her day went horribly wrong. EVERY one made fun of her ALL day.
When she finally got home she sadly realized that her OLDER brother had on her FAVORITE shoes!! And his sockes did not match either.
there 17 ADJ’s. I guess that it is not that bad being a GRAMMAR DORK as long as you do it in style ( like MRS.V
)
Cya latta alagatas
January 11th, 2008 at 9:34 am
Taco gone bad
Once upon a time there was a BIG BAD BURRITO killer. The name was taco Sanchez Monica Cortez, he was the BIGGEST,BADDEST taco EVER! He was ALWAYS stealing LOTS of peso’s from the LOCAL villagers and they got sick and tired of it so they called in chalupa soopa doopa, he took care of ALL of the SWEET LITTLE village problems and taco Sanchez Monica Cortez got eaten by ALL of the Spaniards. The end!!
January 11th, 2008 at 9:39 am
California
When I was 11 years old I went to the GREATEST place I’ve ever been. It was the AMAZING and DAZZELING Disney Land in California. The BODACIOUS trip took about 4 TIRESOME hours on the SMOOTH-RIDING plane. When we FINALLY landed their was a BUMPY moment but the whole ride went SMOOTHLY.
After we had gotten to the GIGANTIC airport we had rented a BEAUTIFUL Chevy Impala. It was a stick shift and my dad is BEFUDDLED when it comes to those. But I liked how the car looked. It was an AMAZING color.
After we had gotten to our AWESOME hotel we found out we were in walking distance from the AMAZING Disney Land!!!! So we went there every day practically. Thus ending the GRAND vacation at the MARVELOUS California.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:39 am
HAPPY POTATO
Once there was a HAPPY potato. He was very bored so he decided to go on a BIG Trip. He never knew what it was like outside the PUBLIC grocery store. So he decided to leave the WRETCHED bag he was harvested in. He rolled out of his bag and was soon stepped on by a HUGE, MUDDY, BLACK Shoe. His DUMB friend decided to do the same thing, but right as he rolled out, a GIGANTIC hand grabbed him. He was stuck in a PLASTIC bag and taken out of the GROCERY store. He was soon plopped in HOT water in a HUGE, METAL pot. He then had his skin peeled off and was eaten by a family of Four. They then ate some CHEESE pizza and GREEN beans.
FIN!
16 adjectives. I guess it’s not a BAD story. It’s not GOOD story either.
{Whoops! Make that 18 adjectives!}
January 11th, 2008 at 9:41 am
A girl named Nicole lives in the city of Sparta. She goes to her ENORMOUS, FUN-EXCITING school and realizes she forgot her MATH and LANGUAGE homework. She calls her house and no one answers. So she tells her AWESOME teachers where her home work is. She goes to her now BIG, TANISH-COLORED house and goes inside. Before she even gets in the house she hears her SCREAMING parents. She goes in afraid. Her still SCREAMING parents don’t notice their QUIET child until they see her walking quietly in to her room. They yell at her for getting late work that day. Later that SCARY, HYPNATIZING, DON’T-SAY-THE-WRONG-WORD day, her BEATEN mother tries to sneak out taking the other TWO children with her. The FURIOUS, FRUSTRATED father sees them and takes off after them. They make it outside but their even more FURIOUS father calls them back and they start towards him but out SCARED mother tells them to run. They try getting their NEXT-DOOR NEIGHBOR cop to come out. But he doesn’t answer. Their SCARED-OUT-HER-MIND mother gets her foot stuck and falls. The dad goes after the kids. The mother catches up and takes the children and they run and hide. All the while, HYPNATIZED Nicole stays in the house watching, deciding whether or not she should call the cops. She runs back to her room when her father comes and listens to him call the cops. Her FUMING father gets taken to the cop station, under arrest. A FEW days later, court comes but her father doesn’t show. He never showed up and she would never see him again.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:42 am
FIVE years ago there was an OLD and CRIPLED man named Dave. Who lived in a DENSE forest. The hermit was VERY happy living in his RICKEDY OLD shack. One SUNNY day in the BRIGHT forest the old man went fishing in a FRESHWATER lake for some FAT and YUMMY bass.
When Dave got to the CALM lake he saw an ENORMUS bear. He was so FLUFFY Dave could barely see the BROWN bears eyes. Dave was sooo SHOCKINGLY surprised he almost peed in his NEW BLUE jeans. The bear was so appalled at the mans DISCUSTING odor he just caught a MONSTER SIZED bass. Dave ran home as fast as his LONG SCRAWNY legs could carry him.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:43 am
Once upon a time, a long time ago, when the earth had no Noisy, Stinky, Ugly humans to pollute the Wonderful, Great, Green earth, there lived these Majestic creatures called dragons. Now I know that people don’t believe in the beautiful creatures anymore and Some people claim that no one has ever really found dragon bones or fossils, but that’s because the Smart, Talented dragons saw that their end on Earth was near, so the dragons the age of 72- 3059 decided that the would find a Million-mile away Brand New galaxy to live in. Those who were to young to made the Great, Long journey had to stay with those who were too old to make the Impossibly long journey, and try to hide from these Monstrous, Killing people for as long as possible, and the dragons would burn the bones of those Dead dragons so the Evil humans would never know that these Great creatures excised.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:43 am
Hey Mrs.V I am so glad that you finally put on a new Question!!!
Well here goes nothing
Once upon a time in a land that was just over that LUSHIOUS, GREEN hill behind Meadowview Middle School there were ADORABLE raccoon people. There was a raccoon named Emily. Now you know how raccoons love to eat FILTHY trash she was more of the clean type. She hated trash she would only eat FRESH, HEALTHY greens. One day when the rest of the raccoon people were out getting some more ATROSHIOUS trash for the next week Emily was out getting her GARDEN greens. She went to her favorite spot in the forest and as she was picking up some BEAUTIFUL flowers a very SMELLY kid from the middle school put her into a net!!!! This DISCUSTING kids name was Billy and he want to show everyone that he had a “pet” raccoon that could do AMAZING tricks but could also talk. So he took Emily home and told her that he knew that she could talk and was a very SMART and INTELEGENT raccoon. So he took her to school the next day and she talked and did her OUTSTANDING tricks. Then he took her back to the top of the WONDERFUL hill were she lived and was never bothered by another STINKY or any other kind of human again!!! But of course her and SMELLY Billy stayed in touch. The End
Well Mrs.V that was 17 adjectives!!!!!
Well Got To Go. TTYL
Lots of Love,
January 11th, 2008 at 9:44 am
Steve the Snowman
There once was a snowman named Steve. He lived in Canada. Steve was friendly and had a lot of friends. He loved to run, and play EXITING, FAST PACED games. One day his friends and him decided to have a LONG, EXHAUSTING race to WARM Africa. They agreed to start at 6:00 am the next COLD morning.
The next CHILLY morning the friends left EXACTLY at 6. Steve noticed that the warmer it got the smaller he got. So he took a break and looked for a COLD place. He found the FROZEN FOODS section of a super market. The manager found him and kicked him out. He kept going.
Once he arrived in HOT, SUNNY Africa he melted completely, but he won the race. Poor Steve.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:44 am
There was a young girl walking home from school very SLOW. When she got home she did her chores and ate dinner then walked up the stairs. Her mother notice something was going on so she went up stairs to talk to her daughter. Her daughter said “nothing is wrong just I’m reallyTIRED.” Her mother went down stairs VERY upset because she didn’t know what was going on with her daughter.
The next morning the daughter smiled something cooking down stairs so she ranas FAST as she could down the stairs. Her father was reading the news paper and her mother was making breakfast it was pancakes, bacon, and home made orange juice.
She got all her stuff together for school she was running out of the house because she was LATE for class. Her teacher was teaching class when she ran into class her teacher wasn’t happy with her so after class the teacher had a talk with her how is always late for class. She went home SLOWLY because she was thinking of how she needed to get to class earlier and she found a solution she had to get up earlier and now she was not UNHAPPY any more.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:45 am
Fredrick the Duck’s New Shoes
There once was a CRAZY duck named Fredrick. He lived in the DRY, SANDY desert. Now, it’s kind of hard to live in a HOT desert if you are a COOL duck. The BLAZING sand hurt Fredrick’s TINY, LITTLE feet. He decided he would get some COLORFUL, NEW shoes.
He went to Harry’s SHOE shop and looked around the on BIG, BLUE shelves. Fredrick saw PINK shoes, ORANGE shoes, GREEN shoes, BLUE shoes, RED shoes, YELLOW shoes, and PURPLE shoes. There were TENNIS shoes, sandals, and BALLET slippers. Fredrick had a hard time deciding what to get when Harry came out with SHOE boxes in his HAIRY hands. Fredrick said “I love those shoes!!” Harry replied, “What shoes?” “The ones in your hands,” said Fredrick. “These are boxes,” exclaimed Harry! “Can you make them in to shoes?” inquired Fredrick. “Sure,” said Harry.
So, Harry made shoes out of boxes for Fredrick and Fredrick loved them!
January 11th, 2008 at 9:46 am
Readers: tp should have followed directions and put the adjective in ALL CAPS.
Once upon a time there was a boy born with a basketball in his hands.
People don’t how there was a basketball in his hands when he was born
There just was. So his parents named him B-balla. Now he could walk when he was only 2 months old and his dad was a huge basketball fan so he took B-balla to the gym and b-ballas dad was amazed at his skills he was in shock that he fainted. Because that baby could shoot threes and dunk like a mad man! Now everyone in his town was so impressed people would pay to watch the 3 month year old baby to play basketball.
Everyone wanted to challenge b-balla even NBA players but he schooled them all.
Now he was famous all around the world. B-ballas 1 year old birthday has come up
and for his birthday the Boston Celtics are going to ask him to sign this 3 year contract for 5 million dollars.
And b-balla did so now he is playing in the NBA with the Celtics,. He is a really small guy but he is real fast. He is faster than everyone. So one was going so fast he couldn’t see any body. And he didn’t no were he was going so he ran into shaq and died.
It was a very tragic ending for this little guy.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:46 am
Just a Normal Day…Or Not?
Once upon a time, there was a LITTLE girl, who wanted to go shopping, for a NEW outfit. So, she asked her mom and her mom said yeah, and then her mom handed her, her REALLY, COOL debit card, and away she went. But, when she got to the mall, there seemed to be a kind of WEIRD hostage situation. They wanted all the DELICOUS candy, for CandyLand, and they were threatening the workers with REALLY, COOL, TOTALLY RADICAL, squirt guns. Now, these squirt guns were REALLY powerful.
Now, the LITTLE girl, was eating some candy, when a really WEIRD, FREAKY, dude approached her, and said give me that candy, and she replied, “make me,” and he PULLED out his V-8513 squirt gun and said, “Give me it, or I will shoot!” and she replied “Owww I’m so scared,” and he said “yeah you better be!” But, however the girl was not FRIGHTENED, and she replied “I was just joking!” Then he got REALLY, ANGRY, and said into his walkie-talkie, “we’ve got a case of not freightened!”
Then, the guy that had the other Walky Talky responded, “Bring her to me!” Then, the LITTLE girl REACHED into her pocket and pulled out her pepper spray, and with ONE LITTLE squirt of her pepper spray, into his eyes, she began to run!
Then, when she saw a bunch of OTHER people getting approached she just would RUN over to them and spray the guy in the eyes with the pepper spray. Soon, everyone was running, and the BAD, WEIRD guys were chasing after them! Then, Mall Seruicty was called and then you can guess what happens next. So, just remember anytime you go to the mall just remember to carry your PEPPER spray!
January 11th, 2008 at 9:47 am
Readers: DD should have typed adjectives in ALL CAPS
One day in the Deep Dark forest there was a Lonely Old man that didn’t like to go in the cities when we did it was only for food, clothes and stuff for his house. One day he had to go in the city so he went in the city and got his stuff on the way to his house he seen a Nice and Clean house by his that he has never seen before.
So he knocked on the door no one came so then he went home. The next morning there was a Neat looking not note under his door it was from the guy at the Clean house. The guy was from a different country he talked a different language Chinese. It turns Out the other Old Lonely man didn’t like cities either. But they wanted to be friends but they couldn’t because they both spook a different language. So the Old Lonely man is still lonely and has no friends. But he does live happy ever after.
January 11th, 2008 at 9:48 am
Tiny Tina the tiny Otter
Long, Long ago in the DEEP, BLUE sea there lived a TINY otter named Tiny Tina. She collects dresses to wear to SPECIAL places, like out to eat!! She lived in the COLORFUL forest of coral!! She has a secret crush on the MUSCULAR otter (Billy) living next door to her!
One day when Tiny Tina was going to get her mail, Billy was trimming to COLORFUL seaweed!! Just before Tiny Tina opened the FRONT door, Billy called her name! So Tiny Tina went over to talk to him. “Hey Tina,” said Billy. Tina replied, “Hello.” “Would you like to go out to eat with me tonight?” asked Billy. “ Of course!” exclaimed Tina. Then Tiny Tina bolted to her FISHY house and was stressing out cause she didn’t have anything to wear!! So she swam down to the SMALL dress shop to find a BEAUTIFUL dress! She saw RED, ORANGE, YELLOW, GREEN, BLUE, and PURPLE dress, but none of them peaked her interest. When she was about to head back home she saw this BEAUTIFUL, SPARKLY, PINK dress. So she bought it and she swam as fast as she could back home. They had and EXCELLENT time on their date!!
The End
January 11th, 2008 at 9:49 am
cleancom98Michaela and Taylor are TWO BEST friends that lived in the AWESOME state of Wisconsin. They had a HUGE house that they owned together. It had A LOT of GLAMOROUS rooms. When you walk into their house there is their HUGE, FLAT SCREEN tv, like in the MOVIE theaters. Right next to it they have concessions, with BUTTERED popcorn, SMALL sprees, and CAFFINE filled pop. After that room, it goes to their rollercoaster that takes them anywhere in the mansion. The first stop is their bedroom, it is ORANGE and PINK. The TWO beds were special mad for them, it is a HUGE bed, BIGGER than a king size bed. There dog’s beds are COOL too, they are A LOT of colors with SPARKLES on them, well for Michaela’s dog, and Taylor’s dog bed is BLUE and has SOCCER balls all over it. You have to see their closet, they have a closet that moves and A LOT of EXPENCIVE cloths and shoes. Of course ACCESSERIES too! The THIRD room is their in door WATER park with cool RAFT rides, and their WAVE pool.
The other rooms are their kitchen with DELICIOUS foods, their SOCCER field, with GREEN, GREEN, grass and their RECORDING studio, where they goof around and record music. Outside is cool too!!!!!!! It has their HOT tub and their other FUN stuff. Their house is so COOL!!!!!!!
January 11th, 2008 at 12:41 pm
Once their was a STRONG steer who was vary BOARD because their were no challengers among the herd. So, one day grazing in the fields and noticed a hole in the fence. He was and off through the DENSE woods he went. Three days later he realized he wasn’t as FERIC as he thought so he turned back TRUGING back through the DENSE woods. When he returned all the others trough a HUGE party for him. And he realized you are only STRONG as a family.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:24 pm
Con’s story!
Once upon a time, there was a LITTLE girl named Susie that lived DEEP in the woods. She lived with her LOVEING mother, RUDE brother, BEAUTIFUL sister, and SLEEPY dog. They all loved to hunt and catch BIG fish. One day, they all were by the SKUMY lake. Susie was bored so she started wondering around. She found this DEEP ditch that had a door in it. She opened the BROWN door but it was locked. She looked around and then saw a BRASS key. SHE took the BRASS key and put it into the lock. It opened! Then she went inside.
It was a HUMUNGOUS water park on the inside! She was so excited! She ran back to the truck really quick to grab her PINK bathing suit. She went down all the LONG slides; she went off the HUGE diving boards, she went inside the GIGANTIC hot tub! The last thing she did was go on the Toilet Bowl! It was the SCARIEST ride of them all! She went to the TIPPY top and looked down. She was trembling! The ride was 450 feet long and you had to be 10 or older to ride it! She sat down in the YELLOW tube and screamed her head off! Susie had TONS of fun on the ride! At the end of the ride, she was shaking a lot!
The next day, she told her sister about it and she went to it too. They both spent the WHOLE day at the water park and loved it!
THE END!!
January 11th, 2008 at 1:24 pm
ONE SUNNY day Jacob and Lily went skipping on a NARROW path. As they went along they saw a bridge made out of sticks and vines. On top was a YELLOW, UNIQUE design made out of SWEET smelling flowers.
They wondered where this STRANGE,GOLDEN bridge led to, so as they crossed it they could start see what seemed to look like a fantsy… but was real. They saw a place where as you thought of things they appeared out of a THICK,PINK,PUFF of smoke. Jacob and Lily lived happily ever after.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:25 pm
Readers: Again, AL should have put ADJ’s in ALL CAPS.
There once was a little girl that liked chocolaty fudge. She loved it so much that she paid a filthy rich person $100 for extra chocolaty fudge. That ended up to be bitter fudge.
So that night she told her very caring parents what happened, that day. They called the blue security guards to get that mean person. Unknowing that the guy lived next door, so he gave back the money a bought the girl free chocolaty fudge
January 11th, 2008 at 1:26 pm
Well for my short story I’m going to write a short piece from the first book in my new series “The Land of Elves”. (I hope it gets published!!)
Here it goes
The universe is BIGGER than any of us can imagine. There are universes like ours and there are some that are very, very different. In the universe that I am going to take you to has a world very like our own but instead of humans, it is ruled by elves. WOOD elves, DARK elves, NIGHT elves, BLOOD elves, LIGHT elves, and several other races of elves. There are also dragons. RED dragons, YELLOW dragons, BLUE dragons, GREEN dragons, and several other colored dragons and even RAINBOW dragons that can change colors almost like chameleons. The elves and dragons have been fighting for years. Several GRUSEOME, GORE FILLED battles that end in the lose of thousands of elves and dragons. Im going to take you to a small village on the continent of Sharva were a young BLOOD elf and his family are preparing diner. His name is Kyron which means “Chosen One” in the BLOOD elf language. The prophets say that the chosen one will save the elves and stop this war once and for all.
Hope you like the intro thingy of my book and I hope that when it gets published that you all crack it open and read it and like it.
See Ya!!
January 11th, 2008 at 1:27 pm
Burrito Monster
Once upon a time there was a TERRIFYING burrito that came to the WONDEROUS state of Wisconsin and started destroying everything in its sight. Later on in the week he came to Sparta. This was the WORST mistake of his WHOLE life. Chase lived in the Sparta. Chase had a MASIVE appetite. He loved HAM, EGG, and CHEESE burritos. This was the kind the BURRITO monster was. Once Chase knew about the BURRITO monster he went hunting for it. Once he saw the HUGE burrito he went loco. The BURRITO monster went crying to his mom. Chase with his MASIVE appetite, ate both the BURRITO monster and his much LARGER MOTHER burrito.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:27 pm
The Water Park!!:)
Once upon a time, there was a LITTLE girl named Susie that lived DEEP in the woods. She lived with her LOVEING mother, RUDE brother, BEAUTIFUL sister, and SLEEPY dog. They all loved to hunt and catch BIG fish. One day, they all were by the SKUMY lake. Susie was bored so she started wondering around. She found this DEEP ditch that had a door in it. She opened the BROWN door but it was locked. She looked around and then saw a BRASS key. SHE took the BRASS key and put it into the lock. It opened! Then she went inside.
It was a HUMUNGOUS water park on the inside! She was so excited! She ran back to the truck really quick to grab her PINK bathing suit. She went down all the LONG slides; she went off the HUGE diving boards, she went inside the GIGANTIC hot tub! The last thing she did was go on the Toilet Bowl! It was the SCARIEST ride of them all! She went to the TIPPY top and looked down. She was trembling! The ride was 450 feet long and you had to be 10 or older to ride it! She sat down in the YELLOW tube and screamed her head off! Susie had TONS of fun on the ride! At the end of the ride, she was shaking a lot!
The next day, she told her sister about it and she went to it too. They both spent the WHOLE day at the water park and loved it!
THE END!!
January 11th, 2008 at 1:28 pm
When I was a little girl about three, my mom, dad, and I went to Florida as a trip. I can remember the COOL, BLUE water, the SANDY beaches, and the BREATH-TAKING views. In we were in Florida we went to Daytona Beach. There were a lot of CRAZY sea gulls flying around in the CLEAR, SUNNY sky. There were a lot of other people besides us at the beach on that NICE day. I wish I could go there again so I could remember more.
We also went to this FABULOUS hotel were we stayed for TWO days. When the BLAZING sun was high in the sky we started the LONG, TIRING ride back to our home in Sparta, Wisconsin. That was a FUN trip.
Bye
January 11th, 2008 at 1:29 pm
Once long a go a Bean Burrito was greasing his way down the little town of Taco Bell. He was working on counting his Greasy Beans when along came a Cheesy Bean Burrito. He was stunned by her Cheesy wrapping and couldn’t stop watching her slither down the sidewalk. When she was by him he Doubled Over when he saw he Cheesy lips drip with Grease.
They went out to get a Bean & Cheese Mcflury. On the way home they sat and he leaned over and his Greasy Beans fell out of his head. They left after the incident they walked to his House. They said a Greasy Good-Bye. That concludes the theory that Bean & Cheese Burritos can live in a world known as Taco Bell.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:31 pm
When I went to Washington D.C, I heard and saw a lot of SAD things. I saw people that had buckets and were screaming for us to give them money. Although I wanted to, we were told not to. I also saw a lot of COOL things to, like the TALL Washington Monument, the LARGE Lincoln Memorial , and the LONG path to the Roosevelt Memorial. When we went to the Smithsonian, that was just about the most AMAZING thing. They had the First Ladies’ actual dresses. I also saw the actual RED RUBY slippers. I still have the picture I took of them. Some of the people that I went with were too busy to look at the RED slippers because they were too AMAZED by the escalator.
On the way home from Washington D.C was LONG but still FUN because we brought LITTLE handheld games, sang, and all laughed together. After that LONG and TIRING trip we still had fun in the TREMENDOUS Washington D.C.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:33 pm
Once upon a time, there lived a SMALL boy. He lived in the LARGEST city in the world. He went on MANY EXCITING adventures. This is ONE of them.
Steve had a PET dog. The dog’s name was Bob. Steve took Bob on a LENGTHY walk. They came upon a CIRCULAR pothole. Steve decided to take a DANGEROUS risk, and looked inside. He saw EIGHT GREEN alligators inside. Steve and Bob went in the SEWER system.
When they were both inside, Bob started running. Steve followed Bob, and came across an INJURED alligator. She wasn’t feeling good. She was hungry for some SHRIMP cocktail. Steve was not a BRIGHT child, so he left Bob in the DARK sewer, to watch the HUNGRY alligator.
When Steve got back to from the GROCERY store with the SHRIMP cocktail, he could not find Bob or the alligator. He searched for SEVERAL hours, and still could not find Bob.
Later THAT night, Steve found the SMALL alligator he met earlier. The alligator was fine.
Eventually, Steve found Bob, inside a very DARK ALLIGATOR stomach.
The End
January 11th, 2008 at 1:34 pm
hey
This COLD winter we went to the ROCKY Colorado. In the SNOWY Colorado went to MILE HIGH city. At Denver we went to the MILE HIGH stadium, where the DENVER broncos play AWESOME football. We went to the HUGE Pepsi Center, where the FAN ADORING crowd watches the Denver avalanche. In MILE HIGH city we went to 16th street mall. It’s a HUGE OUTDOOR mall. It was BITTERLY cold so we had to hurry to get in the stores.
In SNOWY Denver we COOL aunt an uncles PIMPIN home. It was so windy there that the TINY dog they have was being blown around. It was so snowy there was HUGE drifts, that were like 5ft tall.It was Christmas then so we ate a HUGE dinner of DELICIOUS chicken, WARM biscults, BUTTERY potatoes, and bright YELLOW corn. It was an AWESOME trip, but then we had to fly back.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:34 pm
The Smallest Boy
There once was a boy named Pippin. He lived in the SMALLEST house and in the SMALLEST village of all the land. He was a YOUNG boy, ELEVEN years old to be exact. He had the SMALLEST family (which was no one) in all the land. He had the SMALLEST everything. One day he was walking down a DARK alley. He found an OLD bottle. He was curious and wanted to know what was inside the bottle. He opened the bottle and out popped a GHOSTLY looking man. He said he was a ONE – THOUSAND year old genie. The genie also said his name was Avon. Avon said to Pippin that he had ONE wish. Pippin knew exactly what he was going to wish for. He wished and then he found himself just waking up in the BIGGEST house and in the BIGGEST village of all the land. He looked in the BIG mirror and saw that he was the BIGGEST person in all of the land.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:35 pm
THIRTY POINT BUCK
Well I’m DEER hunter, how about you! This is the BEST tale I would like to share with you! ONE, COLD day, my ROWDY buddies and I went up in the TIGER Woods to go and get that THIRTY POINT Buck! Now we all had to go up through the DARK Woods through that THICK snow, just to get to our DISTANT stands.
Well it took about FOUR hours just to reach my stand, and I kid you not! Just as I took that ONE step up my stand, there he was the THIRTY POINT buck! So as fast as I could I got out my BIG BLACK Gun. I got that HEAVY gun up to my RIGHT shoulder and I scoped him out! As I was situated I got my FROZEN finger on that TIGHT trigger and I took a RISKY shot. As I looked up from my HELPFUL scope I realized that my TROPHY buck was gone!
It took about FIVE months to get over that UNFORGETFUL day. And even though I missed that THIRTY POINT buck, I still go up to TIGER woods each year and try to get that MASSIVE buck each and EVERY year! Some say he’s still alive other say he isn’t, all that I know I’m gonna get that THIRTY POINT buck!
January 11th, 2008 at 1:35 pm
I’m going to tell you of the most AMAZING SOCCER player in the world. His name was so FAMOUS and TANTALIZING that people perked up as soon as they heard the letter his name started with. His ORDINARY yet MAGNIFICENT name was Johnny, Johnny Lodico III. He could move the SOCCER ball with such skillage that he pwned everyone, to him his opponents were PUNY WEAKLINGS. I am going to tell you of his BEST game and the BEST game ever played in SOCCER history.
The INTIMIDATING score was 9-0 and the BEAUTIFUL Italian team was loosing to the U.S.A. He was stuck in a FREAK accident, a 500 CAR pile-up, but he wasn’t in the CAR pile-up he was in the ANNOYING, FRUSTRSTING, and SLOW TRAFFIC jam caused by the 500 CAR pile-up. But he was listening to the game on his CAR radio. He knew he had to get to the LARGE stadium and fast. So he called his PRIVATE JUMBO jet and was swooped out of the jam and taken to the stadium.
When he got on the field you could see SAD people turn into HAPPY people and u could see a MAJESTIC aura floating around his TAN and CHISELED body. But when he started playing he kicked the SOCCER ball from mid-field and as hit people the ball was like a HEAVY boulder crushing their FRAGILE femurs, shins, and spines. It went through them and straight in to the goal. Then he scored 6 goals from the CENTER line and 2 from their mid-field. He was tired but he had to score one more he was right in their GOALIE box. But one of their defenders kicked him in the back of the leg he snapped his foot but he still got a RED card. Now Johnny has a PENALTY shot. He takes the shot and crushes the goalies THICK skull- but he’s ok. The Italian team won the World Cup 9-10 and he lived happily ever after.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:36 pm
Leary Sherry Day
One day Leary Sherry woke up to find that her
BLACK dog had pooped in her bed!! So she went to her closet to put
on her PINK POLKA DOT slippers. She took her dog outside for a LONG and GLOOMY walk. While she and her dog were walking they ran into this strange cat. The cat had LONG, BROWN fur and it was limping. She went over to pick up the cat to see what was wrong with it. But as she bent down to the cat, it turned a PALE green! “OMG!! What just happened!” she said to herself. Then the sky went a dark.
She started to tremble. She looked around for her dog and saw that it had run into the DARK woods. “Come back dog!!” she yelled. Scared, she scurried after her dog. When she got into the woods all she could see was GLOWING, RED eyes looking at her!!! They SPOOKY eyes we’re coming closer and closer to her. She didn’t know what to do so she took of her PINK POLKA DOT slippers, through them at the SPOOKY eyes and started to run!!! As she was running she said to herself, “Why did I just waste my new PRETTY slippers on those DUMB SPOOKY eyes?” Then suddenly she tripped over a PRICKLY branch and woke up from her DREADFUL dream!!!!
January 11th, 2008 at 1:37 pm
SCARRRRRY story
Once upon a time there was a SMOKY PEACOCK PANDA bear. This PANDA bear was very different from the other bears in the woods in Asia. He had TWO heads!! The PEACOCK head was WHITE and BLACK like a panda’s. the PANDA head was PRETTY and COLORFUL. The PEACOCK head was vicious and ate LITTLE birdies. The PANDA head was pretty and calm but loved to eat bunnies.
One day a group of tigers came up to the SMOKY PEACOCK PANDA bear. The tigers wanted to eat the bunnies that SMOKY PEACOCK PANDA ate. The animals got into a fight. The PEACOCK head fell asleep. The PANDA head blew fire and started the California wild fire. Then the SMOKY PEACOCK PANDA bear died.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:38 pm
SUMMER DAY
One HOT, DRY summer day LITTLE Kenneth Norswether was sitting out side on the HOT CONCRETE porch. Suddenly he began to wonder what he should do on this SUPPER SUNNY day, right then and there an idea struck him and he blurted out “I know, I should go to the beach. I love the SHINY BLUE SPARKLING waters. Why not?” So Kenneth rushed inside eagerly.
As Kenneth ran inside something strange grabbed his attention. It was his ill mom lying on the bed. He rushed over to see what the matter was. His mom explained that she had the flu. Kenneth thought in the winter how could this be. So he gave up on going to the BEAUITFUL beach to care for his sickly mother.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:38 pm
One day bob was having an AWESOME day. He walked down the PUBLIC Street to the store. He had a BLUE, BLACK, MUDDY shoe that he wanted to get polished. He couldn’t get it polished so he went on a HUGE, LONG trip. During his LONG trip he found a MARVELOUS store that said free shoe polishing sign, he went in and got his shoes cleaned. He was HAPPY about that. It took two days and his vacation was gone in those two days that flew by.
When he got back his driveway was all HILLY so he hired a de-HILL person and he drove up on the HILLY drive way and fixed it to make it FLAT again Bob was happy about that. He went to sleep on his SMALL bed and watched HAPPY boy that night. He woke up REFRESHED and feeling TOUGH today so he entered a BIG football completion and got beat really BAD he his days keep on going on from there.
January 11th, 2008 at 1:39 pm
Once upon a time there was a SMALL family living in a cottage. They had know idea where they where in the BIG world but when they where coming over the GREAT plains they got lost so much they just decided to live where the crop and water flowed. This family had a LITTLE boy named Walter who loved to get into mischief.
One Saturday Walters mom told him to go and deliver 3 BROWN packages but don’t take the SHORT cut through the DARK woods because that is where the BIG BAD giraffe lived . So LITTLE Walter ran off with the BIG BROWN packages. But he went in the DARK forest on the short cut.
But the BIG BAD giraffe caught him and ate him whole with a side of butter. The packages never got to thier destinations. And Walter was never seen again.
THE END
January 11th, 2008 at 2:09 pm
Once upon a time on the FUNNY planet called earth, there was an EVIL wizard who lived in SMOGGY Seattle. This EVIL wizard did a lot of NASTY stuff. One time he stole a bunch of PRECIOUS money from a CHARITY center and turned the WEEPING accountants into BLUE carrots!
But the worst of all was when he turned A kids LAME shirt into a SLIMY squid!
You should of seen the HALARIOUS look on the kid’s face! He looked as if he had a BEAN burrito and a SUSHI dish at the same time! He was bawling his PUINY eyes out!
This is my DEVILISH story about the NASTY things the EVIL wizard did.:0
January 11th, 2008 at 2:09 pm
There was once a SHORT, FAT man. His name was Bob. Bob hated his EXHAUSTING job. Everyday, Bob drove the LONG drive to get to work. He would hang up his TREMENDOUS TRENCH coat and sit down at his TINY desk. He had hardly any room at all! Suddenly, on this PLAIN, BORING day, Bob noticed the most BEAUTIFUL creature he had ever lay his eyes on. This MAGNIFICENT beauty was also staring at him.
Quickly Bob thought for a moment. The GEORGEOUS woman made her way to Bob. As she approached Bob, he realized it was his UGLY mother. Why had his mother looked like such BEAUTIFUL creature from far away? It didn’t matter. All she wanted to tell him was that he had forgotten his HOT soup for lunch. In the end Bob realized today was just another MISERABLE day.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
Minnesota State Fair
Last year in the HOT summer I went to the HUMMUNGAS Minnesota state fair. It was the GREATEST and most SPECTACULAR fair I had ever gone to. All I ate there was some GIANT foot long corndog. They were so good. When I was showing my BEAUTIFUL and GRACIUS heifer we were in a HUGE arena. I had to show my AWSOME heifer in the most UNCOMFORTABLE BLACK boots I ever wore. When I won RESERVE champion I had to have been the HAPPIEST kid in the whole WIDE world. But when I was there the BEST ride was the GREAT BIG log ride. When the COLD water hits your back it is just about the COOLEST thing there.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:15 pm
There ounce was an OLD man who had a FUNNY name a it was Canotrapionsinteck, but everyone callas him Phil. One SUNNY day he decided to go explore a PIRATE ship. It was 100million feet into the DARK and MYSTERIOS ocean. This Phil guy is not afraid of anything not even the SICKEST and OLDEST person in the world.
He went into the ocean and what he saw was amazing. He saw WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL, POWER RANGERS toothbrushes everywhere. Then he got eaten by a shark.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:20 pm
ONE day there was a BIG, STONG man named Thomas. He wanted to Shoot the BIGEST, Buck in the WHOLE, WIDE world. So, he packed up his BIG 30.06 rifle and some other accessories and went back to his LOVEFILLED parent’s house. This house was a SMALL LOG cabin in a DEEP wood filled with LOTS of DIFFERENT kinds of game. So Thomas went out with OLD Bessie and got himself a HUGE, 30 point buck.
The end
January 11th, 2008 at 2:21 pm
There once was CHUBBY, FAT mouse named Ralph. Ralph loved food, but his favorite kind was YELLOW foods. See, Ralph was a HUGE mouse and had a WADDLEY walk. He could never keep up with his FUNNY, FIT friends when they went for a walk. One SUNNY, BRIGHT day Ralph was eating some YUMMY cheese and reading the GRAYISH colored newspaper when he say a COLORFUL advertisement from a fitness center for OVERWEIGHT mice.
The next day Ralph went to the BIG fitness center. There weren’t a lot of mice there, which made him feel happy. Ralph meet his STRONG, SKINNY trainer named Henry. Henry worked with the OVERWIEGHT Ralph for four BEAUTIFAL months! By the fifth month Ralph was as skinny as a SMALL post, he could finally keep up with his friends!
January 11th, 2008 at 2:22 pm
My dog Peter
My dog Peter is a mixed breed. He is Husky with black lab. My dog is very special to me. He becomes filthy very fast and drools a LOT. He is very protective and loyal to his owners aka my family. Except for my sister (-_-). I do a lot of stuff with him. I take him on long walks, car rides. It’s pretty great. He loves to play tug-o-war all the time.
We as in my family also have two tanks of fish another dog that’s really thin named Sarah and a cat that’s almost the size of a bulldozer named Tiffany. I still give all my attention to Peter though because Sarah doesn’t like me and Tiffany sleeps with me every knight. My dog peter just recovered from very painful leg surgery. They cut his leg open fixed his bone then put him back together with 22 staples in his leg, OW. Now when we go on our long walks we have to take it easy. That’s about it for my big Pete
January 11th, 2008 at 2:23 pm
Once there was a cat, but not just any cat, no, this cat was a lioness. She lived in a pack of FEIRCE lions. Her name was Crista and she was the BEST hunter in her pack.
One day when she was hunting she came across a measly looking desert fox. The fox was far to SKINNY looking to eat so she decided to leave it alone. Just when she was about to walk away the SMALL creature said “Are you a GOOD hunter?” “Yes,” said Crista. The desert fox, named Simon, then asked her to catch him a SMALL meal. Crista HESITANTLY obliged.
After that the two became BEST friends and lived happily ever after.
The End!
January 11th, 2008 at 2:23 pm
The Three ants
Once upon a time there were THREE bugs. They were PRETTY BLACK ants. They were trying to get YUMMY food for the GREETY army of ants. The wonderful food was across the block. It was a very RISKY task not MANY would get the food but usually NONE came back. They were all packed and ready to go. It was going to be a LONG THREE day hike. They set off the first ant on the way there was BRUTALLY squished by a YOUNG man running for a STRIPED ball. The other TWO ants ignored and kept going. The TWO reached the food and cheered very LOUD but then all of a sudden a PRETTY cardinal came down and swept the second one away. The third ant was amazed but ignored and grabbed A LOT of the DELICIOUS food and left. He knew he had to be careful. After THREE days he got back home and he was happy because he suvived so he went to the GREETY army and gave them the AWESOME food. Then all of a sudden a MONSTEROUS ant eater came out and viciously ate EVERY ant in the WHOLE army including the THIRD ant. The end
January 11th, 2008 at 2:24 pm
One Day a LITTLE boy named Jacob was born. He loved DIET Coke. A COUPLE months later a LITTLE boy Named Nick was born. He loved Mentos. ONE day they met. Nick said, “hi I love Mentos.” Jacob said, “hi I love DIET Coke.” Nick said, “I wonder what MENTO Flavored DIET Coke would taste like?” Jacob said, “lets find out.” So they dropped a REGULAR MINT mento into the DIET Coke. All of a sudden the DIET Coke flew up TEN feet in the air. Right the and there a NEW hobby. So EVERY day they found out ways to make it go HIGHER and FASTER. They even found a way to make it into a rocket. They also made a lot of cash from this discovery.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:24 pm
Hyia Mrs. V
There once was a SMALL peanut on a RAILROAD track. He was just a NORMAL peanut with a BROWNISH-GOLD shell. The SUMMER wind was not a STRONG wind; it was just a GENTLE breeze. It didn’t even stir the LITTLE BROWN peanut. The peanut sat there for a FEW hours, doing nothing. Basking in the SHINING sunlight, the peanut lay.
Soon the RAILROAD tracks began to shake. The LITTLE peanut vibrated and shifted. Then, BLAZING light shone down on the HELPLESS peanut. The LONG RAILROAD tracks seemed MUCH smaller as the BLINDING light moved closer at LIGHTNING speed, towards the LITTLE peanut. EACH second seemed to be in SLOW motion. Closer, closer the GIANT light came. Then, the DARK outline of the front of the LARGE train came into view. The RAILROAD tracks were violently shaking. The peanut had nowhere to run! Closer the BLACK train came. Then….Swoosh, the train zoomed past. LITTLE BROWNISH-GOLD PEANUT shells littered the RAILROAD track.
The End
January 11th, 2008 at 2:25 pm
I hope you like it!
One day, long, long ago there once was a SMALL girl with STAWBERRY blonde hair, BRIGHT blue eyes, and her WONDERFUL name was Sally. Of course everyone new that Sally was an ELEGANT princess. She lived in a LARGE castle with HUNDREDS of BEAUTIFUL rooms in it. Sally loved to swim in the CLEAR pond by her house. She also liked to ride her CUTE pony Gingerbread.
Well, one day Sally was riding on her horse when she met a HANDSOME boy. They both started QUITELY talking and PRETTY soon the HOT sun was SLOWLY setting. The boy told her to meet at the EXACTLY the same time as they did today. Sally, did so and theher WEIRD surprise, the CUTE boy was not there. She cried her heart out. Then, the HEARTBROKEN Sally never saw the HANDSOME boy NEVER again.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:26 pm
FLUFFY, FUZZY, BUNNIE LAND
Once upon a time I visited a place called FLUFFY bunny land. It was a FLUFFY and FUZZY land where you didn’t have to worry about anything. Everything just seemed to work out because the bunnies there were so GOOD that they never really did anything that HORRIBLE. So I thought well I might as well go meet a FUZZY, FLUFFY bunny since I was going to there a while. So I went along and bumped into a PINK bunny that was really nice and had the name Emily. So I told her that I was a NEW bunny in town and she showed me around there FUZZY land.
So she showed me where I would be staying. Then she left and I got curious and wanted to now who my GRAND neighbors are. So I went and knocked on there door and they answered and offered for me to come in and meet the family. So I went in and got to now the family. After I left I wanted to make some WONDERFUL friends. So I went into town and made some new friends and there names were Jill, Phil, Lil, and Gill. So we became very CLOSE friends and a GREAT, FLUFFY, and FUZZY life.
THE END
By: Emily Lydon:)
January 11th, 2008 at 2:26 pm
Pink Flying Pigs
Once a pond a time there was Beautiful PINK FLYING PIG named Oinker. That was the WEAKEST, PRETTIEST, LOVELIEST, and FUNNIEST pig I have ever seen in my Old life time. So one BEAUTFULL day the pig was RUNNING up a hill and made it on top of the STEEP hill. She started singing and dancing because she made it to the top of the STEEP hill, but all of the sudden the WEAKEST, PRETTIEST, LOVLYEST, and FUNNIEST pig fell down the STEEP Hill and couldn’t stop…… She starts PUMMPING her feet and pretty soon she was flying with an airplane.
The next day she realized she had a talent her talent was being a BEAUITFULL PINK FLYING PIG that could save the world!!!!!!!!!! So that day she went to the mayor of PIGS town and told him that she FLY he didn’t believe her and said no to the supper hero ideal. The next day she saved a pig from JUMPING over a fence and the mayor saw what she did and know is known as PINK hero!!!!
January 11th, 2008 at 2:27 pm
Once there was a WHITE and BLACK dog. His name is Tuffy. He is so strong that he can pull a BLACK jeep. One day my OLDER brother brought him over. When I was still sleeping he brought him in our SMALL house.
My mom and OLDER brother had him jump on me and my other sister when we were still sleeping. It felt like I just got squished by a YOUNG horse. After that my mom told all four of us kids to get ready so we can go sledding. When we went sledding we went out in the back of the house and Tuffy pulled us on a LITTLE and THIN sled so we had to be careful so it wouldn’t break. So that is all about the WHITE and BLACK dog named Tuffy.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:28 pm
The FLYING pig
After THREE days of LONG experimenting on SEVEN pigs one could fly. The names of the SIX pigs that could not fly were pig 1, pig 2, pig 3, pig 5, pig 6, and pig 7. The AMAZING pig that could fly was pig 4, but was changed to Zipper. Zipper loved to fly freely to the DIRTY mud plot of the OLD farm next to the building. The CRUEL scientists don’t allow Zipper to fly away.
Than one GRAND day the HEARTLESS scientist forget to shut the METAL door and Zipper waited for the night to come. When the COLD night came Zipper quickly got out of the HUGE building. The night was cold, but Zipper felt warm. He flied to the GREAT mudding areas of the middlewest.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:57 pm
Kb
My story is about AN ANONOMOUS boy named boy. He likes to kill things.
HIS mom is a news reporter. HIS mom is A MONKEY shoe. HIS mom likes to eat
And KILL things to. However, they are both VEGGIE eaters. That is why HIS mom works at a NEWSPAPER factory.
One day they saw a NEWSPAPER EATING monster. They were mad. So they went up to it and ate it. They liked it. It TASTED like a rodent. So after that they lived HAPPILY EVER after. Oh ya, they ate a GEOBEEEATINGBLOGMUNCHINGELAPHENT at dinner time
January 11th, 2008 at 2:57 pm
One FINE day, the MIGHTY Jack went to go eat a BIG breakfast with Flirty Bertie at the Holiday GAS station in Minnesota. They ate FOUR apples and NINE HUNDRED PIZZA squares. They were as full as a BIG, FAT pig. They loved to eat. They were the most SUPER, AWSOME, FUNNIEST people all around town.
They went shopping and seen a SMALL girl in trouble. They FRANTICKLY flew over and picked up her STRAWBERRY ice cream before it fell on the floor.
January 11th, 2008 at 2:59 pm
Once upon a time there was a HAPPY LITTLE turtle that loved to play. He really liked the WET, COLD, BLUE rain. All his turtle friends came out to play with him. They all were thinking were is the rest of out friends. The FURRY rabbits, SLIMMY snails, WET fish, and the SMALL mice.
So they set of to find the rest of the friends. On there way to find the rest of there friends they were having a jolly good time. They were skipping, running, galloping, and trotting. They got to the BRIGHT, BLUE pond were the fish lived and they saw nothing not even a TINY spec. The FATTEST turtle swam down and asked why aren’t you playing with us. The POOR, LITTLE fish said it’s raining and u know what happens when I get rained on. The turtles went on and herd the same response from all the little turtles.
After they got back to there favorite playing spot they finally realized that they should of thought before doing that, they knew that they only all play together on BRIGHT, SUNNY days down at the pond for a nice little swim with the fish.
THE END
January 11th, 2008 at 3:02 pm
Once upon a time there was a HAPPY, girl who wore nothing but the BRIGHT, COLORFUL color of orange. Everyone had known by now that she must of liked the color orange, because if she hadn’t she would have been wearing it. All throughout the LONG, HARD years of their life of working through school, they asked the QUIET girl about her wearing ORANGE everyday. Even though they didn’t know if they were going to get an answer.
The girl replied, my favorite color is orange. The students thought that they all had a favorite color, but they didn’t wear it everyday. The curious students thought, why else would someone wear orange? If they didn’t like it?
January 11th, 2008 at 3:03 pm
Once there was a HAPPY girl. She liked to eat SLIMY noodles. ONE day the CURIOUS girl went to the DOWNTOWN square. There she went to an ITALIAN restaurant. The ITALIAN restaurant held many HAPPY hostesses, COOKING chefs, and the MANY eaters. She decided to sit by a NICE boy. The NICE boy had BROWN hair and HAZEL eyes. He went to The ENOURMOUSLY LARGE TOWN’S school that held MILLIONS of floors. They SOON started talking. They both liked the many HOT kinds of noodles. They then found out they both like a lot of things like ITALIAN pizza, CHINESE rice, HUNGARIAN goulash, and AMERICAN CHICKED NOODLE soup. They soon became FAST friends and did MOSTLY everything together.
One day they were walking VERY quickly. They had to get to the ITALIAN restaurant that held their FAVORITE food, SLIMY noodles. They were ALMOST there when a GIANT GREEN monster named George POPED out. They SOON ESCAPED quickly, without having to use their FAMOUS KUNG-FOO KARATE moves. They reached the place in a QUICK time period, but they still didn’t make it to eat their DELICIOUS DISGUSTING SLIMY noodles. The TWO SAD kids were VERY depressed. They soon got over it though.
January 11th, 2008 at 3:07 pm
Laura’s SHOPPING Spree
One SUNNY day Laura went to the BIGGEST SHOPPING mall in the world. When she got there all of the GOOD stores were closed! So she went to another store with her OLDER sister. She thought that the store was WEIRD. After a while she decided to go back to see if her stores were open. When she got to them she ran in as fast as she could. She got a BLUE shirt, a pair of RED leggings, and a SHORT MINI SKIRT. She got a lot more COOL PRETTY too. Her FAVORITE thing that she got was a pare of BLACK HIGH-HEELED shoes.
When she got home her BOSSY mother made her take the HIGH-HEELED shoes back. Her mother said that the heel were too high. Laura QUICKLY went up to her room. She laid on her be and sobbed all night. In the mourning she got out and sneaked down stairs. She got some YUMMY breakfast. Her mother came in and told her that she had thought about the shoes and decide that she could keep them.
January 11th, 2008 at 3:09 pm
Note this story is VERY true and takes place in a town near you.
It was a wet, smoggy, foggy day in China A teenage boy just woke up and started getting ready to head to school. He did everything like usual. When he got to school he would always buy a pop tart from one of those FANCY machines a vending machine. He put the SHINY nickels and quarters in, pushed the button and waited for the DELICOUS pop tart to pop out. But all of a sudden it got stuck o no he cried! The end 0(-_-)0 Your blog is really cool now Ms.V
January 11th, 2008 at 3:10 pm
A STORY OF TURNER.
Yet another story of my cousin Turner Anthony.
One day Turner got bored so went into town to play awesome pranks on short town people. First he would need some accomplices so he got the pig king, Dr. Phil, Corey Males, Ling Ho, and Mrs. Veglahn but she was really boring and no help so they kicked her out of the group. There first target was lowho the king of the goat heads. They filled a bucket with water and put it over his door. They rang the door bell and ran to hide in some bushes. When lowho opened the door the water poured on his head. The group thought it was lame so everyone but Dr. Phil left him. Then the pink lemonade man came and told them that they needed to help a chicken that was going to be plucked of his feathers. They set out to help him. But first they put a “kick me” sign on lowho’s back. When they reached the chicken he had already been plucked so they looked for the culprit the kitty kings 7th brother 45 times removed. They searched and blogged then searched some more. They got some of that stuff people use to wax there backs and kept going. When the found the cat they stuck the paper on him and ripped of all his fur, “oh, the irony,” said the kitty in a strong Irish accent the chicken gave Turner his reward, a nice cold, frothy, glass of pink oh sweet pink lemonade. Which he enjoyed very slowly.
THE END!
January 11th, 2008 at 3:10 pm
RS
My story is about a TINY elephant. The TINY elephant name is Gorge.
He likes to play in the GOOYEST mud. But one day he decided to play to play in a new mud hole. From the looks of it was not as GOOY as the other ones, but he tried it anyway. So Gorge jumped in. Then he noticed the more he moved the more he sank.
As he screamed at the top of his lungs he stopped moving. Then he noticed the less he struggled the less he sank. He kept yelling but no one came. He waited four day then finely got helped out .
January 11th, 2008 at 3:11 pm
Hi
Elegorana
Once in a forest 44,444 MILES away a baby was born. You see the parents where killed by an EVIL wolf named Dercrose. And on that same night a wolf was born as well and was named Agmadale. A mother wolf was out looking for food and came about to see a little human baby with BEAUTIFUL tan skin and SKY blue eyes, and had NICE brown hair. She took him back to the cave where her tribe hid from the storm that they SMELLED form a mile away.
If you want to here the rest of the story ask Jessica E.
I read her books and they are so full of ADJ.
And please ask her so you can here the rest of the story and you will be blowen away because I was.
JEE
January 11th, 2008 at 3:13 pm
Lynn went to school Monday and it was share time well Lynn shared about her AMAZING weekend. When she shared about her AMAZING weekend she talked about her BLUE slumber party, why it was blue was because every EACH girl that went had to wear BLUE or a type of BLUE like TURQUOIZE, BABY BLUE, or even a shade of PURPLE-BLUE pajamas.
All Lynn’s DEORATIVE decorations were blue our a type of blue. Her house or area of PARTY was really AMAZING and PRETTY because it all matched because all BLUE things match. At the BLUE party they had games like pin the tail on the donkey, hide and go seek, and flash light tag. After the games they ATE cake and pizza, opened presents, and they hit the BLUE DECORATIVE piñata. Then after all that FUN party stuff they watched movies while they talked ALL night. Then in the BRIGHT and BEAUTIFUL morning, they ate LIGHT and FLUFFY pancakes or waffles with BROWN and CREAMY syrup with a side of CRISPY and DELISIOUS bacon. Then Lynn’s mom said that they should call their mom’s to come pick them up.
January 11th, 2008 at 3:14 pm
Little the Lamb
There once was a lamb named Little. She wanted to go into the WHITE and GREEN house. Only the SPECAIL lambs got to in the house.
“They get to sleep on the SOFT bed.” said Little.
Little was still very little. She wanted to be in THE house
so bad that one day she did something that no other dare to try. Little walked right into the house. The farmer didn’t see her, the farmers wife did. The farmer’s wife was wounding why she was in the house. She deiced that Little was big enough to stay the house. Since then Little has been in the house.
January 11th, 2008 at 3:16 pm
The Little Boy who called Shark
Allen and is TALL dad went fishing in the BLUE-GREEN ocean. Allen got all his GREEN and RED fishing things and loaded them in to the BROWN and RUSTY looking truck. They charged down the WIDE road.
Fifteen minutes later they were there. Allen got out of the BROWN, RUSTY truck and helped his TALL dad unload the BABY BLUE with SLIMY stuff on the out side of it. So placed the BABY BLUE boat in the BLUE-GREEN ocean, and SLOWLY rowed them selves out to the DESPRIT middle of the water, till the could not see the COLD land anymore.
While Allen and his TALL dad sat in the BABY BLUE boat Allen yelled out shark, and Allen’s TALL dad started freaking out like a LITTLE girl scout. When Allen told his TALL dad to CLAM down, it was a FUNNY joke, his TALL dad got EXTREMLY mad. This WONDERFUL, FUNNY joke went on and on till Allen’s TALL dad didn’t leasing no longer. Under that BULE-GREEN ocean ALLEN saw a GRAY SCARY shark coming their way. He yelled shark in a SAD voice. But his TALL dad did not listen!
January 11th, 2008 at 3:17 pm
Susan and the Snow Problem!!
One RAINY day little rabbit named Susan never liked the rain because it was always WET and COLD outside. He LOVED to play in the BIGGEST pile of snow. He LOVED the snow because could put on his SPARKILY snow pants and go out in the HIGHEST snow banks he had in his GIANORMOUS field. He had three OLDER brothers and they all hated the WONDERFUL snow because they thought it was WERID to play in snow banks. He wanted to leave his BEST FRIEND Fred and never wanted to see his INOING OLDER brothers again.
He went to see his friend Fred for some GOOD advise to see what he should because he never wanted to see his AXIONOUS OLDER brothers again. Fred told him that if he left his family they would worry about him. Well Susan didn’t want to take Fred’s advise because he didn’t care about him anymore. So Susan QUIKLY ate some DELISOUS breakfast before he left to his grandmother’s house. His grandmother wanted to know why he was here. He told her that he was going to stay with her until she dies because he wants to be with her when she does. She asked him to tell her the truth or she was going to take him back to his house. So Susan told her the truth and his grandmother called his parents to tell them that Susan will not come back until his OLDER WEIRD brothers stop picking on him. So he went back home and it started snowing. Him and his OLDER brothers went out and started jumping in the snow with no SPARKILY snow pants.
The End
January 13th, 2008 at 1:34 pm
Once upon a time there was a SMART, ATHLETIC boy by the name of Harry Plopper. He lived in SMALL town named Little Whinging, England. He was a STRAIGHT A student, loved school, and went every SINGLE day even if he was TERRIBLY sick. He loved ALL classes which is why he couldn’t honestly tell you which was his FAVORITE.
He was in MANY sports, however, flyball was the one that he CHERISHED the most. His held the MOST CHALLENGING position as the TEAM’S catcher and was a MAGNIFICENT captain.
After he graduated as CLASS valedictoian, he COURAGEOUSLY battled the EVIL Lord of Handcuffs. Despite his GREAT wisdom, he was viciously overpowered by a MEEK PEPSI-DRINKING squirrel.
April 14th, 2008 at 7:54 pm
Once upon a time there was SWEET,CUTE girl named Lily! She lived in a SMALL,CUTE cottage in the middle of the DARK, SCARY woods. Everyday she rode the bus to school and tried her best in a FINE, and EDUCATED school. Until one SUNNY day she caught a glimpse of the new guy the walked in with a GREAT, PICTURE CAPTURING smile that everyone stared at.
He gave his introduction, his name was Jacob. As she became friends with him, they bacame madly in love. The lived happily ever after!!!!!
THE END!!!!!!
September 9th, 2008 at 8:47 am
LV you changed your blog GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!
I still love you though I miss you lots
love ya
Halla♥